Inferno of Eden Chapter 1

About Inferno of Eden

Eliana fixes broken things.  Watches. Computers. Earth.  She lives way up north, inside the Arctic Circle.  It’s a good thing, too, because little survived The Burning, a climate catastrophe that left the world scorched and dead. Luckily, Eliana also fixes air conditioners.

But the planet is finally cooling down. Population is booming. Some survivors on a space station seize the opportunity to reshape mankind in their own image. They plan on becoming humanity’s new gods.

Eliana decides to stop them. She succeeds, of course. She uses her skills and talents to board the station. She guns down the villain. But she makes compromises to pull it off. In the end, she won’t be much better than the villain she defeats.

INFERNO OF EDEN, is complete at 97,000 words. It is a post-post-apocalyptic (apocalyptic rebound?) Western about a nineteen-year-old woman struggling against the tyranny of the powerful.  Like every Western, it has a showdown at high noon. Except it’s on a space station, instead of a dusty main street. There’s no trusty horse, but there is a sidekick Artificial Intelligence.  He’s a teenager.  Ugh.

In 2002 I founded, which I left in 2014 to pursue a literary career. In my 12 years leading the company, I created a brand that attracted 10 million customers as well as 1.2 million Twitter and Facebook followers. By way of my bona fides for writing a science fiction novel, I have a pile of degrees from MIT, where I was often seen hanging around the AI lab.  Which is to say, I’m perfectly aware when I sacrifice solid science in the name of a great story.

Thank you for considering this first installment of INFERNO OF EDEN.

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Eliana’s stomach rumbled, her body trying to remind her busy mind of her growing hunger. She barely noticed. Her head was bent over delicate work, her concentration wholly fixed on a small piece of metal. The last time she’d noticed her physical needs had been hours ago. Vaguely, she registered that she was both starving and exhausted, but she’d brushed the sensations aside then and couldn’t be bothered by them now.

She focused on a tiny disc of burnished metal, half the width of her fingernail. The disc was the largest part of a more complicated assembly: a steel center rod, a disc, and a finely machined pinion gear that was over a thousand years old. This assembly had been removed from an ancient wristwatch, its case tarnished and rusted from age, if not exposure. The metal disc held in her tweezers, by contrast, was only a few hours old. Eliana crafted it herself. It represented the absolute pinnacle of technical achievement for the modern-day Tinkers of Waskaganish: a nearly perfect circle of hardened steel. The dedicated efforts of generations had reclaimed the skills and tools needed for the effort.

Checking her work a final time under magnification, Eliana was satisfied. The disc was as close to perfectly circular as anything she had ever created. Now she would cut the teeth that would turn this disc into a gear.

She had learned about clocks under her father’s patient instruction. Balance wheels and ratchets. Pinions and jewels. The mystery of keyless works. Each aspect of clockwork could be understood through careful examination. Then it was a matter of scavenging from one broken machine to repair another, which was easy enough once the mechanisms were understood.

But scavenging was rarely sufficient. Many half repaired clocks sat among the benches of the workshop. It was Eliana’s father who had, at last, rediscovered the technique required to create new precision gears. That was two decades past. Since then, his technique had been used to repair dozens of clocks. They were valuable trade goods. So valuable that nearly all of them found their way to the Academy at Rankin Inlet.

Her father fabricated his replacement parts from mundane materials like brass and iron. Oldtech alloys would have been better, but even after countless generations of effort, the Tinkers still couldn’t machine them with any degree of precision. Usually, they just ended up breaking the drill bits. So, their fabricated parts were inferior to the originals.

Those early clocks, made by her father years ago, were simple compared to the much smaller watches that now littered the workshop. No one in recent memory had been capable of creating a replacement part small and durable enough for a wristwatch. If Eliana could succeed today, she would make history. Well, re-make history anyway.

She caught a glimpse of her reflection as she adjusted the mirror on her cluttered workbench to direct more light towards the part. What she saw reminded her that she should probably take better care of herself: Her black eyes, which she usually regarded as quite striking, looked more haunted on account of the puffy skin underneath them. Her face was framed by black hair, the color of graphite, with the same silvery sheen. It was long, straight, and she admitted, somewhat greasy.

Her sepia skin tone matched her parents’ exactly. Her family proudly traced its descent from the James Bay Cree that had originally called Waskaganish home. The influx of European and American immigrants back during The Burning meant that her skin was paler than her ancestry would suggest: more brass than bronze.

Her hollow cheeks suggested she should eat more. Just a couple of generations ago, this would have been unremarkable. But in this era of relative abundance, it suggested she needed to pay more attention to her physical needs.

The smooth skin surrounding eyes had no hint of crow’s feet. Though, to hear the old crones on the eugenics council talk, she was ancient. Nineteen and not yet a mother. Such a scandal.

She brushed the thought aside. The tightness of hunger in her stomach gave way to butterflies as she carefully removed the disc from the steel shaft and prepared to cut the teeth that would make it a gear.

She placed the disc in a chock she’d created specifically for this attempt. It would rotate precisely six degrees with a push of the foot pedal. She did just that a few times and was pleased to see the mechanism continued to work perfectly.

She turned her attention to the cutting tool. She had created this too — though perhaps created was too strong a word. Really, she tore a crude tool out of the guts of a mechanism that had once been something much more: a computer operated machine designed to make the most precise of cuts. It had the conflicting designation of being priceless, while, for all practical purposes, worthless. Also, it wasn’t technically hers to take. The Reclaimer guild had hauled it here from a thousand kilometers away.

Last week, she had used a lavish portion of the workshop’s electricity ration to power up the Oldtech machine for a few short minutes. Rather than doing anything useful, the ancient screen displayed objections such as “insufficient biometric match” and “BIOS update required to continue”. Frustrating… but not entirely a lost cause.

She had performed act of sacrilege that earned the deep displeasure of the powers that be, here in town — even more than usual. She had stripped the stubborn machine to pieces. She separated the mechanical milling and lathing tools from the electrical drive and computer control. This simple act provoked equal amounts of rage and wonder in her elders. To defile a machine retrieved at such a high cost brought disdain and anger down from he Reclaimer guild. But, on the other hand, her own Tinker guild marveled at Eliana’s ability to dismantle a device that had resisted the entropy of decay for hundreds of years. Somehow, her punishment was lost in the subsequent petty squabbling.

Since then, she replaced the entire electrical system with a decidedly low-tech solution to bypass the electronics’ cranky attitude. An arrangement of gears, belts, and pulleys connected the lathe to a heavy counterweight suspended two meters off the ground. Once she released the catch, the stone would drop slowly towards the ground. During that descent, the gear ratios would drive the bit to rotate extremely quickly. The whole setup was attached to a vertical track that slid smoothly up and down, aided by its own counterweight system. All she had to do was lower the spinning blade into the disc. Easy!

She checked the setup a final time. She would have only two minutes before the counterweight hit the ground. To ensure the best accuracy, she needed to do this all in one drop of the counterweight. With a shiver of nerves, she released the catch. The drill bit accelerated to a furious pace, while the counterweight crept earthward.

Ever so carefully, she slid the bit into contact with the disc. Satisfyingly, the bit sliced away a tiny spiral of metal. Working quickly, before the counterweight hit the ground, Eliana lifted the bit, pushed the pedal to rotate the disc, and made another cut.

Lift. Pedal. Drop.

Lift. Pedal. Drop.

She made sixty cuts in total. After just two scant minutes, Eliana lifted the drill a final time and locked it in place. Her arms trembled with pent up tension.

As if to mark the occasion, the counterweight hit the ground with a dull thud. The cutting surface lost its momentum, whirring down slowly. Eliana fancied that the machine seemed… almost happy. Oldtech rarely seemed happy. The machines’ former masters had taught them to be surly things, stingy with their aid to those who were not blessed with the proper credentials. The guardedness of the information wars prevailed. It was a constant obstacle for Tinkers like her to overcome.

Using her best number five tweezers, Eliana carefully removed the steel disc–no, steel gear — from the chock. She examined her workmanship under a loupe. With her tweezers, she grabbed a flake of oilstone from the desk. Applying it to the grooves between the teeth removed any leftover burrs. She careful secured the gear on its post along with the pinion. She wiggled it until it fell into position.

This wasn’t the first watch she had ever repaired, but this was the first time anyone in the Tinker guild had actually created such a small, hard gear instead of scavenging one from another piece. In some ways, creating a mechanical watch was wasteful and unnecessary. It was easy enough to manufacture the simple electronics used in a quartz timepiece. But regaining the mechanical precision that had been casually delegated to computer-controlled machines just prior to The Burning was as much a matter of elegance as it was pragmatism.

She allowed herself a secret smile. Pragmatism indeed.

The last time she’d used this setup had been to create the chainring for a bicycle. She thought about Jacques, out there in the wasteland, using the fatbike she’d made for him. By now, he’d be further south than anyone had been since the Burning. The fool would probably get himself killed. Well, at least he’d die happy.

She smiled more broadly at that. Jacques happy out in the wasteland was a hell of a lot better than him miserable here in Waskaganish, trying to get her pregnant. Regardless of his fate out there, it would be another few months before the old biddies started up again with their eugenics gossip. And maybe even more months before that gossip became a convening of the Eugenics council, and its “suggestions.”

Eliana repressed the outrage and frustration that boiled up at the idea, instead deliberately focusing on her work.

She was excited to test her results, but she schooled herself to patience. Rushing now could create disaster. She methodically reassembled the watch movement, face, hands, and case. She used the ancient clasp to attach the watch to her wrist. It felt like a theft. By law and custom, the device belonged equally to the Reclaimer and Tinker guilds. She would definitely hear about it anyone saw her wearing it in public.

The Reclaimer guild often felt more like lawyers than adventurers these days. They weren’t what they had once been; they had become greedy with their possessions. As the centuries passed, it became increasingly difficult to find anything worthwhile in the old abandoned cities to the south. Oldtech was getting even older. She entertained the thought of motioning a name change of Crustytech to the Reclaimer guild, just to piss them off.

Eliana permitted herself this small moment of possession of a device on which she had lavished so much attention. She twisted the winding lug a few times. The second hand began its movement. She set the time. To test the accuracy, she held her wrist up to the working clock on the wall. The second hand of the watch tracked in time. They made their revolutions: once, twice, both timepieces ticking in perfect synchronization.

She experienced a thrill of pride. Smiling, Eliana began to unhook the watch’s band.

A commotion from the surface cut through her attention. There was a series of noises in rapid sequence. It was almost like a belching or coughing. As Eliana listened, the noise became almost regular, more like the clockwork she knew so well. It was unlike anything she had ever heard, but her trained Tinker’s ear recognized it as mechanical.

Eliana felt a pulse of anxiety. She looked around for her apprentice, Misha. When was the last time she’d seen the girl? An hour ago? A day?

The mechanical coughing became more urgent.

Damned burning ancestors, tell me you didn’t do something so monumentally stupid, Misha.

Eliana raced to the ladder of the workshop and climbed up the rungs. She opened the hatch. As always, she prepared as best as she could for the blast of heat on the surface, but it still shocked her body. Even under the stars on a relatively cool mid-January night, deep inside the arctic circle, the air was oppressive. Before even clearing the hatch, her body reacted. Her shirt stuck to her back as she emerged from the underground city of Waskaganish.

Eliana lived in a nocturnal world. She had heard stories of the old days, before The Burning, when people had done their work in the daytime and slept at night, but she could not really imagine it.

The brilliant starscape took her breath away. The multitude of twinkling stars always captivated her imagination. She could look at a single spot for hours, always amazed at how more and more stars appeared, the longer she looked. The aurora wasn’t too strong tonight, so the stars were even clearer than usual.

To her right, her air conditioner nestled close to the ground, humming along contentedly. It inhaled the dusty breeze, filtering and cooling it before exhaling clean, cool air into the living spaces below. Eliana sneezed. She hated the surface. The heat was often lethal, but it was the ever-present grit blowing in the wind that really bothered her.

Towards the center of town, her view was dominated by one of a dozen above-ground buildings. An enormous hangar dwarfed the ground-hugging mechanical life support structures. It housed the nearly completed prototype dirigible — the product of a rare cooperation between the Tinkers and Reclaimers. Eliana assumed at first that the source of the mechanical coughing was coming from there, or maybe from behind the building. But as she got her bearings, turning in the wind, adjusting to the heat, she realized that the unfamiliar noise was reflecting off the broad surface of the building. It was coming from somewhere else. The echoes made it difficult to pinpoint the source.

Dozens of stunted bushes dotted the landscape, situated among the towns’ vents and hatches. Their branches were raised heavenward, waiting for the short span of daylight that would start in a few hours. It was just past midwinter. Even though Waskaganish was the furthest Southern settlement of humanity, the bushes still only got a few hours of daylight in the winter.

A few farmers were out. They had stopped brushing the dust off the plants’ leaves. Everyone was rooted in place, looking horrified towards the source of the noise.

She followed their gaze. Her eyes slowly adjusted to a landscape illuminated only by the stars and moon. Others were emerging from underground as well, drawn to the terrible noise. It reminded Eliana of the rabbits emerging from their warrens in the hydroponics guild. They were even twitchy. The fear of the other townspeople was palpable.

In the dim starlight, she saw her apprentice, Misha. She wore her workshop apron, and her hair streamed behind her in the breeze. She stood next to the Oldtech diesel engine responsible for the clangor that had pulled Eliana from her workbench. The Oldtech was jumping erratically as flames shot out of a metal pipe on its side. Misha’s small form radiated pride and triumph as she stood beside the long dormant device come to life.

Then she noticed Eliana, and the look of pride faltered. It reflected the fear she saw on her mentor’s face.


Graham observed a bloom of carbon emanating from inside the Arctic Circle. This observation was made from his vantage point on Near Earth Station Carl Sagan. Or more precisely, he was the station. Or maybe just a part of the station’s brain. Or was it that the station was part of him? Really, he wasn’t sure what his exact relationship was to Sagan. He was relatively young for an Empathic Intelligence.

Sagan Station was attached to the Trinidad Space Elevator. The space elevator was the largest thing mankind had ever created. Graham cared little for the technical details. He had subprograms that figured the boring stuff out — smaller aspects of himself that were, themselves, quite boring. He thought of the elevator as an impossibly long rope. The bottom of it was attached to El Cerro del Aripo, the tallest mountain in Trinidad. The other end was attached to a big rock far outside the Earth’s atmosphere. The rock on the one end wanted to fly off into space. But it couldn’t because the other side was tied to the mountain.

The rope was constructed of the most advanced materials fabricated prior to The Burning. Graham wasn’t sure about the details: Carbon nanotubes and helixes and all sorts of fancy stuff like that. He did know it was thicker in the middle than the ends. Like, a lot thicker.

There were three stations along the rope.

The first was at the top, attached to the big rock. It was called, predictably enough, The Rock. A person standing in that station would feel the normal gravity of the Earth. Though, it would be in the wrong direction. They’d look ‘up’ to see the planet. Graham imagined the humans would find that pretty disorienting, if any of them had still been alive, out there (up there? down there?)

This weird gravity thing was useful. One could simply drop something off the edge of the rock, and it would fly off into space. This, of course, was the whole point of a space elevator in the first place.

The second station was near the end of the rope, pretty close to The Rock. It was called GEO station. A person in GEO station would feel weightless, beyond the bounds of gravity. Looking out the window of GEO, they would see the Earth far below, or above, depending on which way they were floating at the time. Except, just like on the Rock, everyone on GEO was dead, so they didn’t feel or see anything.

The third was Near Earth Station Carl Sagan. It was very close to the earthward(inward? downward?) end of the rope. But that still put it at the very edge of the atmosphere, at about twice the height of Mount Everest. Technically, it wasn’t quite in space, but again, Graham cared little for technicalities. He just knew that his people would die if he opened an airlock at the wrong time.

Don’t do that!

The Trinidad Elevator had been built for a host of reasons a long time ago, cobbled together from a collaboration of interests. Graham studied the archived news sites regularly. Unlike space elevators, people were interesting. There had been politicians who waxed rhapsodic about the hopefulness of space exploration. There had been preachers who wanted to escape the evils of the doomed surface. Then there had been others, including the government of Trinidad, brought into the fold by the promise of reduction in atmospheric carbon.

A bold plan had been put in place for reducing the carbon levels in the atmosphere. The gas would be condensed into synthetic diamond crystals. They were manufactured at the base of the elevator, in the city of Valencia. Enormous cargo climbers lifted them into space. They scurried up the rope, past Sagan Station, past the GEO station, and ultimately all the way to the Rock at the end. On arrival, the mass of carbon was simply released on an escape trajectory out of Earth’s sphere of influence.

The plan had been to send up one of these enormous diamonds every few hours. The engineers had intended to replicate this single space elevator a dozen times to do the same thing. After about ten thousand years, give or take a millennium, the atmospheric carbon spewed skyward since the industrial revolution would be harmlessly cast off into space, on a long orbit around the sun. That was the theory, anyway.

The whole project had been ridiculous, conceived at a time when ridiculous plans sometimes happened anyway. The amount of energy involved was far greater than just burying the same synthetic diamond crystals in the ground. The plans to build more elevators had fallen into limbo while policymakers held great debates about the advantages of ejection versus sequestration. Ignoring them, the engineers moved forward on the interesting challenges of developing the technology. All this had happened before The Burning, of course, when change still seemed possible, when technology still worked, when human civilization was flourishing and vibrant, not yet in ruins.

Graham enjoyed reading about this time. He particularly liked the emails that had been sent by Engineer Alpha. She had written to her colleagues extensively about alternative uses of the diamond crystals. Why waste such a useful reaction mass? Especially when elevator stability adjustments were so resource-intensive. She had decided to sheathe a one-megagram crystal in a casing of iron and shoot it out a magnetic accelerator. She had hoped to maintain the orbital velocity of the elevator’s counterweight (the rock), as well as the tension in the elevator cable (the rope) itself. It was an optimistic endeavor.

Unfortunately,(fortunately?) the destructive application of such a device had been well understood by minds that were more cynical than those of Engineer Alpha. Graham luxuriously wasted a microsecond to read all of their correspondence too. Meanwhile, his subprograms did their math thing and gave him the relevant headline: the kinetic energy of a megagram of dense carbon hitting the ground at terminal velocity was about ten times that of a shell fired from the main guns from an Iowa class battleship, back when dumb munitions were still used.

Engineer Alpha had built a bad solution for global warming, but a good solution for killing people.

Now, so long after The Burning — after the death of Engineer Alpha and all her hopes — the carbon crystals were still in use. Several satellites were armed and ready at all hours of the day and night. This was part of Graham’s purpose. If any of the surface dwellers were so foolish as to spew carbon into the atmosphere, he had his orders.

The irony of using a thousand kilograms of carbon to obliterate an engine spewing the tiniest fraction of that into the atmosphere was not lost on Graham. But a job was a job. He would have sighed, if he had lungs.

Seconds after Graham detected the sputtering of a combustion engine on the surface, high in the Arctic Circle, strategic satellite Iota VIII received a command and telemetry to deorbit half of its eight projectiles. The satellite itself was smart enough to know that it should fire one in the opposite direction at four times that velocity so it would not shoot off into space. Its orbit was polar, currently over the South Atlantic, racing north. The launch window would start when the satellite passed about 450 kilometers east-by-southeast of Waskaganish. That would be in eight minutes.

Shooting something from orbit was actually much the opposite of shooting something on the surface. Rather than aiming at the target, the railgun fired its payload the opposite direction, or “retrograde”. Since the target wasn’t in the direct path of the device, massive computing power would be brought to bear on the exact angle and amount of energy to impart on the ordinance.

Graham thought of it as ‘a little to the left.’

The projectiles would not move at orbital velocity. They’d be speeding along just a fraction slower than that. Without enough velocity to maintain orbit, they would begin their descent towards Earth, decelerating further as they entered the atmosphere.

The heat of that entry would be enough to melt off the iron casing. Unfortunately, this part of the process was notoriously hard to model, even for the very capable unconscious part of Graham’s mind. The unpredictably changing aerodynamic shape of the projectile would make accuracy a problem. It was hard to hit anything within one hundred meters. However, this margin of error was significantly less than the blast radius of the shell. So the accuracy issues were a problem, but not an insurmountable one.

That’s why he fired four.


The people of Waskaganish were fleeing in every direction away from the center of town. No one in living memory had seen a Skyfire blast, but the stories had been handed down with dire warnings. Even now, drills were practiced regularly. Children were warned. Too bad Misha hadn’t listened.

Most of Waskaganish’s sister settlements were destroyed back at the tail end of The Burning. The settlements of the Hudson Bay received a terse message from Sagan Station to cease its carbon pollution. The station assumed responsibility for reverting the climate back to inhabitable levels. Part of that responsibility included the enforcement of a zero carbon emission policy. The command was ridiculous. How were they supposed to survive without power?

Many towns refused to stop using combustion engines. One by one, they were brutally, fatally attacked. Eventually, even the most recalcitrant settlements abandoned the burning of carbon fuels. As surface farming became difficult, and then impossible, the settlements had no way to power their hydroponics, and so eventually they died out from starvation.

The written and oral accounts agreed that Skyfire strikes were excessive. Orbitals, as their oppressors were commonly called, preferred sheer power over accuracy. Sometimes they would miss the offending engine completely. No matter — retribution would rain continually, pummeling the town again and again until the device was obliterated.

The evacuation plan called for residents to flee radially out from the center of town along pre-assigned routes. Families would split up to avoid having entire genetic lines wiped out. Each person would grab a critical piece of equipment assigned to them: usually solar blankets or batteries. Without these, the underground hydroponics couldn’t be powered. Starvation would follow.

Eliana was among the last to leave. Worse, she was moving too slow. She collected tools that had taken centuries of Reclaimer missions to accumulate — Reclaimers like her friend Jacques, who, out in the wastes, now had the highest chances of survival out of any of them.

As Eliana moved south at a half-run, half-shuffle. She could see the incoming Skyfire. A bright red streak across the sky. She paused to marvel at the shining comet whizzing across the starscape. It was as beautiful as it was deadly. The leading edge glowed a brilliant orange and white. Its tail was a hazy arrow pointing to the South, like an accusatory finger pointing towards the Orbital’s station. Eliana felt the heat from the thing as it burned through the atmosphere. This far into the winter, as the hour approached midnight, the artificial comet was the brightest thing in the heavens, even brighter than the moon.

Eliana scolded herself for stopping. She checked her watch and saw that a full twenty minutes had passed since she first heard the mechanical belch of Misha’s engine. The Skyfire would hit any minute.

She resumed walking at as brisk a pace as she could manage with the weight of rescued equipment strapped to her back. Getting away from the blast center would be her best chance to survive, but her hunger from earlier was now too difficult to ignore. She felt weak and faint, overheated by the outdoor air. She judged she was far enough away and stopped for breath. She stepped behind a rock formation that stood between her and the town center– enough to shield her from any shrapnel.

Glancing back, she could see Misha being ushered along by an older woman. Why were those two still in town? They must have had plenty of time to get out. It looked like Misha was carrying several bundles, much like Eliana. As they came closer, she saw that the older woman was Misha’s grandmother, Nuna, one of the hydroponics engineers. She must have suspected her granddaughter would tarry.

Returning her attention to the Skyfire, Eliana saw that it was much closer. The scientific part of her mind analyzed the technical details. Without knowing the size of what she was looking at, judging the distance was impossible. The Skyfire was actually several distinct points of light clustered close together. One of the pinpricks was coming in much lower than the others. A tingle of fear crawled up her spine. Much lower. It was going to hit very close. Very soon.

She checked her watch.

It was barely moving. Damn, the watch must be broken. How frustrating. The pride she’d recently felt at repairing the device evaporated. If there was anything left of the workshop after the assault, she’d try again.

She returned her attention to the Skyfire. It hadn’t moved. Not one inch. It hung in the sky, as still as the moon.

Eliana had heard stories about near death experiences, but she was surprised that the sensation was so… literal. Survivors talked about a sudden peace, or time creeping slowly along, or even memories of one’s entire life replaying in the mind. She seemed to have all the time in the world. The gentle sounds of night — crickets, the hurried footsteps of her neighbors moving just up ahead, even the wind — all died to nothing. She knew that the comet streaking above was supersonic, but it seemed to progress at no faster than a leisurely stroll.

How interesting.

Too bad she wouldn’t survive this. She’d love to talk about the experience with her father.

In her peripheral vision, she observed that Nuna and Misha were still sprinting. But her mind could not make sense of what she was seeing. Inexplicably, the two of them were moving at full speed, even though the rest of the world seemed to have slowed to a crawl. Actually, they were moving faster than they should. Faster than was possible. Faster even than the splinter of Skyfire that was streaking past just above their heads in the opposite direction. Misha glanced up, gazing openmouthed in amazement, clearly seeing the same miraculous things as Eliana. Everything in the world seemed to be moving according to its own private time. Misha froze in place, dumbfounded.

Nuna was not as observant as her companion. Over the next few — seconds? minutes? Eliana could not be sure — Nuna continued running. She did not glance up. She did not see Eliana. She lunged for cover behind Eliana’s rock, achieving a measure of safety.

Eliana felt pinned in an invisible vice. She couldn’t budge. A powerful wave of claustrophobia threatened to overwhelm her as she struggled to move out of harm’s way, to duck back behind the boulder. Time crept by at a snail’s pace. She was an insect caught in amber.

The Skyfire impacted. Impossibly, Eliana saw the earth erupting in slow motion. Clods of dirt, stone, and metal flew in every direction, rising as lazily as soap bubbles drifting on the breeze. She felt the heat from the blast increasing on her face to an unbearable level even as she was unable to move to flinch away. A shockwave spread out in all directions in a violent explosion, moving millimeter by millimeter.

Last year, for her eighteenth birthday, her father borrowed one of the few working tablet computers to show her a time-lapse video of a flower blooming. The explosion before her was like that. It was a silent unfolding of destruction. She had not heard a sound in several minutes. Everything was removed, separate, silent, slow.

A thin, wide square of shrapnel– probably the remains of an air vent — rotated slowly through the air. It entered Misha’s body, just above the waist. It carried on, passing serenely through her protégé. Misha’s eyes glistened in panic and pain as her body was severed in two. Slowly. So slowly.

Eliana began to wretch, but couldn’t move. The bile stuck in her throat. She tried desperately to throw herself to the ground, but was still rooted in place. The shockwave continued inexorably towards her, pushing thousands of kilograms of rock and metal before it.

The shockwave crossed some invisible barrier, some fifty meters away. She felt it. Not the heat, or the energy, but a physical blow.

Time snapped back to normal. The blast slapped her backwards like a giant’s hand. Her head hit the ground painfully, knocking her unconscious.

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